TrifeXXXtra – Week #94

*****Warning: This post contains graphic adult language and themes.*****

She waits for him, as instructed: wearing only her skirt and knee socks, kneeling before the couch, her head resting on the cushion, hands clasped at her back. Her every nerve anticipates his key in the lock. Finally he arrives home for lunch, unlocking the door and entering the room.  Wordlessly she raises her skirt, exposing herself completely.  “What a lovely sight,” he remarks, approaching her. At his command she kneels up, her hands meeting behind her. Locking eyes with his she embodies the crackle of desire as she speaks, “I am yours, Sir. Use me as you please.” Her submission is punctuated by a kiss to his foot.

Nudging her forward onto her hands and knees, he observes her half-naked body. His hand traverses her back possessively, navigating the delicious curve of her ass before sliding two fingers inside her. She responds with a sharp intake of breath followed by silence. He grabs a fistful of her hair, pulling it firmly towards him.

“You’re holding your breath. Why?” he demands.

When her answer isn’t immediate, he abruptly removes his fingers from within her. She exhales in a whimper, feeling desperate about this sudden vacancy.

“I wasn’t sure if relishing your inspection was permitted, so I didn’t want to broadcast my pleasure, Sir.”

Releasing her hair, he orders her back up on her knees. “Your abundant wetness already gave you away,” he intones.

“Yes, Sir,” she replies, blushing.

“Who owns your arousal?” he snaps.

“You, Sir. My body, my desire, and my arousal all belong to you, Sir.”

Placing his hand under her chin he tilts her face up until their eyes meet.

“That was a good, comprehensive answer. Pay attention. I’ll only say this once: you are not allowed to disguise any aspect of your arousal in my presence. Is that clear?”

His words reverberate through her chest, pulsing in her cunt. The uninhibited moan they elicit is likely sufficient in response, but she manages to also stammer, “Yes, Sir. Perfectly clear.”

Word Count: 333, written for TrifeXXXtra. 
And now on to a completely different type of prompt. As you may or may not know, November 15 is National Erotica Day.  Trifecta is not an erotica-specific type of place, but we never shy away from a chance to stretch our creative limbs, and we hope you’ll join us as we dive in to celebrate this quirky day.We are asking for an open write this weekend–33 to 333 words of erotic writing.  No specific words need to be used, and we aren’t necessarily banning any either.  If you want to see what our writers came up with last year, click on over and check them out.  This year we are imposing one additional limitation: we are not accepting any entries that deal with sexual violence.  We want this to be a celebration of sensuality.  Posts that contain graphic violence will be immediately deleted from our collection.If you do not wish to publish your erotic piece to your own blog, or if you want to publish it anonymously, we are re-opening Trifecta Anonymous, Trifecta’s hosting blog, for this week only. If you don’t want to use your own blog, please email your submissions to trifectawritingchallenge@gmail.com. Include your text in the body of your email (not in an attachment) and please indicate how you’d like us to credit you (anonymous, real name, etc.).
This challenge will be judged by the community, and the top spot will be awarded a copy of Sessha Batto’s latest erotic book, Strength of Will.  A huge thank you to Sessha for so graciously donating her words.
 
So, hop to it.  Get cracking.  Break out of your comfort zone.  Or, if this is your comfort zone, let us in.This weekend’s challenge is community judged.

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  • The winners will be announced in the comments of Friday’s post and will be posted in our typical fashion in the post on the following Monday.
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39 thoughts on “TrifeXXXtra – Week #94

  1. Valerie

    I was holding my breath here too! The tension is incredible in this piece. I want to know so much more about what is going on in this game of erotic role playing. Excellent writing!

    Reply
    1. Momo Post author

      Thank you. I’ve written plenty of it, I just never post it anywhere where others can see it.This was a good opportunity for me.

      Reply
  2. Thomas Marlowe

    A beautiful D/s scene that goes far further into the truth than abominations like 50 Shades…, there was tenderness and love there as well as the power exchange and I thought it was brilliant

    Reply
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  4. Ivy (Mommy Dourest)

    “She exhales in a whimper, feeling desperate about this sudden vacancy.”
    “… you are not allowed to disguise any aspect of your arousal in my presence.”

    These lines convey their D/s relationship so well and in such a sexy way. I think I’m too bossy to be a submissive (Lol!) but your steamy story has my imagination running wild. Giving someone you trust complete control like this–the way you wrote it–is hot. I might have to try it some time. 🙂

    Well done!

    Reply
  5. atrm61

    Ah ha ha!Naughty Momo!Was she french? ;-)Though S/M or D/S scenes are not my cup of tea-am more “traditional” but your writing is par excellence-the pacing was awesome and as a reader I could feel the anticipation,the tension building up as the lead pair played their love games-very enjoyable! 🙂

    Reply

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